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Life's Like a Box Of Chocolates

Life is like a box of chocolates.
Some of your choices result in something delicious.
And then some result in something nasty.
But it’s those bad choices
That makes us more cautious about the next isn’t it?
If it wasn’t for those random bad choices,
We’d be unwavering and just jump into other important conclusions.
Now being firm in your decisions isn’t necessarily a bad thing
But it is wise to think through these verdicts first.
And be grateful for the poor judgments and miscalculation
We’ve all had them. Right?
Yes they are difficult to live with,
But those wrong turns and blunders
Are what have molded us into
The amazing beings we are today.
Bold, creative, opinionated, bubbly, crazy, caring, humble, wild, quiet.
You know who you are.
So remember the next time you bite into a chocolate
And discover a foul flavor that leaves a harsh after taste
There’s only one box: one life.
Don’t waste your time sulking and regretting the bad choices
Because they have created a beautiful being.



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wordjunkie said...
May 25, 2012 at 10:20 pm
I agree that this might be better as a fiction peice, it's kind of conversational. But, it's good. Interesting simile.
 
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May 19, 2012 at 8:42 am
Very nice job! I love Forrest Gump :). However, maybe this article, instead of being a free verse poem, could be a piece of flash fiction? Just a suggestion - overall, good job
 
Sairalinde_Lossehelin replied...
May 19, 2012 at 1:28 pm
Yeah I started it as a poem but towards the middle that kind of changed. Can I change it from a poem to fiction or is it stuck like this? lol. Thanks for the feedback Leafy and Hippiechick99 :)
 
Josika.Nav replied...
May 27, 2012 at 10:30 am
of course it can be changed! the whole theme and idea is awesome ! but it would certainly work better as an article :D
 
hippiechick99 said...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 7:52 am
Wow, I really liked the depth of this poem. I actually clicked on it because I thought it was going to be a funny poem, but I was pleasently surprised. Keep up the good work 5/5.
 
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