Mistakes

April 7, 2012
By Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
7 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge


All I'm left with
Besides the pain
Is the soft and gentle
Pitter-patter of the rain

Alone with my thoughts
Tears start to fall
I look at my past
Where did I lose it all?

Where did it all go wrong?
When did I lose my way?
The same questions
Run through my head each day

I've made so many mistakes
Many that I can't fix
I just pray that you'll forgive me
But the clocks still ticks



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on Nov. 12 2012 at 8:00 am
remember16 SILVER, WhiteLake, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
This is only a minor setback to a major comeback

I love this poem, i can relate to it so so so much!  ive made so many mistakes and i wait for even my own self to forgive me and it seems like the clock is still ticking!  wonderful wonderful wonderful poem.  you should cheak out some of my poetry, i think you will like some of my work.

on May. 26 2012 at 10:24 am
DaisyAngel BRONZE, Sandy Springs, Georgia
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Cool poem! I know that's a lame comment, but I don't know what else to say. I just loved it! Five stars!

Inksy SILVER said...
on May. 21 2012 at 4:06 pm
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
7 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

Thanks for the comment (:

Inksy SILVER said...
on May. 21 2012 at 4:03 pm
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
7 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

Thank you! 

Inksy SILVER said...
on May. 21 2012 at 4:03 pm
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
7 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

Thank you!

butterfly123 said...
on May. 21 2012 at 2:56 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! beautiful poem!

it is true...bad mistakes can haunt you for life and make you feel unnecessary pain.

 

i like the flow of the poem. i also like the fact that you kept up the rhyme scheme without making the poem seem forced.

 

good job and keep writing! :D


on May. 4 2012 at 2:03 pm
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
18 articles 17 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

Bad mistakes can mess up your life or haunt you... you captured that well in the poem, but luckily most mistakes can be fixed or made up for =) lol good poem it def got me thinking


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