Disaster

April 5, 2012
By LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
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I knew it was all going to change.
Those words you whispered
It took her breath away
Arm draped around her shoulder
She gave you a small piece of her heart
Day by day the pieces grow
She’s pulling away from me,
Drifting to you
Best friends forever
Changed by three words,
“I love you”
Give her the choice to make,
She’ll pick you
You’re everything now
Her life revolves around you

I’m holding on
Hiding the tears
Bottling up the pain
I’m always going to stand behind her
Even when she leaves my side
To be in your arms
I’ll be the shoulder to cry on
When you leave her
Your bound to break her heart
Yet I can’t do anything
Powerless

I stand and I wait
It can’t last forever,
I know it somewhere deep inside
But it hurts me to watch her slip through my fingers,
So far away
Caught it the grasps of young love
The double edged sword
You use it to protect her now,
But when will you change your mind
And instead use it to kill?

You were once like my brother
I warned you when you first told me,
That you would change everything
Once you spoke those simple words to her
I was right, you have
No longer my brother, or my close friend
But now your just the boy
Who’s stealing her away
Who’s putting me through this pain
Who’s bringing the tears to my eyes
Who’s going to tear her apart someday

I knew it was all going to change,
But now look around at the disaster you’ve made.



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on Oct. 31 2012 at 12:11 am
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

I know exactly how this feels. Same thing happened with one of my friends. :) I love love love love love your writing Love :)

on Oct. 6 2012 at 10:24 am
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
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Thank*  amazing typing skills love :P not 

on Oct. 6 2012 at 10:22 am
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
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Thank you so much :D THAT MEANS THE WORLD TO ME! i think theyre hiding O.o XD thanks you again

on Jul. 28 2012 at 1:22 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

*CLAPS!!!!!!* PUBLISHERS??!! WHERE ARE YOU!!!??

on Jul. 23 2012 at 4:44 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win"- Stephen King
“In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate”- Isaac Asimov

I love your writing! it is really powerful and totally true and relatable!! (maybe check out my stuff sometime)

on Jul. 1 2012 at 12:25 am
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
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i meant thank.... pat on the back for my blondness taking control ;)

on Jun. 18 2012 at 11:11 pm
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
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Thank you bobble! and i will sweetie... dont worry about me ever stopping ;)

Bobble said...
on May. 30 2012 at 1:15 am
Bobble, Flowery Branch, Georgia
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Wow Love this is actually pretty good!keep writing i like it

 


on May. 28 2012 at 10:25 pm
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 36 comments
thanks face!!! you too

on May. 26 2012 at 12:09 pm
Just-Another-Girl GOLD, Keighley, Other
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Favorite Quote:
- "A coward may survive...but a hero..a hero lives on in the hearts of the people he saved"

- "Words don't have the power to hurt people, unless the person who said it means a lot"

-
You say that love is nonsense. I tell you it is no such thing._

okay i like it, but i aint sure i get it... whos perspective is it from? 

on May. 25 2012 at 8:31 pm
faceless16 BRONZE, Columbus, Montana
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likin it luv. keep on writing.

on May. 21 2012 at 5:05 pm
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 36 comments
Thank u so much Jas :D i will!!! keep in touch!

on May. 20 2012 at 10:51 pm
TearsofJasmine SILVER, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind," -Gandhi

This is really good luv ! God you have some extreme talent(: Keep writing~

on May. 20 2012 at 6:37 pm
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
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thank u lilith :D

on May. 14 2012 at 12:42 am
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
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that you!!!! <3

on May. 13 2012 at 2:30 pm
anavit15 SILVER, Naperville, Illinois
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great job :)

on May. 13 2012 at 2:26 pm
lilith27 SILVER, Hyderabad, Other
9 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
donot judge a book by its cover

wow man!!ur too gud...luved it!!

on May. 7 2012 at 6:23 pm
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 36 comments
thank you for your feedback! it means alot to me :D

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on May. 4 2012 at 9:05 am
deleted, Miami, Florida
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Wow, really relatable! Good job :)

on Apr. 30 2012 at 6:52 pm
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 36 comments
Thank you :D it means alot!


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