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To Cry

When I was growing up I wanted to cry
Cry for those hungry,
those hurting,
those lonely,
those dying,
But I only cried for myself.
Because I didn’t understand it.



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maizyiscrazy said...
Apr. 23, 2012 at 6:08 pm
Huh. Very thought provoking. I liked it, though!
 
dark_armor1 said...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 8:33 pm
it was good. it could have been a bit more powerful but great topic!
 
dark_armor1 replied...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 8:34 pm
feel free to check out some of my work !  :)
 
JoPepper said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 11:42 am

That was really good, when I was little (and still do) I always wondered why it seemed like no one helped, and wondered why its so hard to help.  Great job!

 

P.s.  I love the topic you seem to write about, innocence, you write it beautifully!

 
eternal_sunshine said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 10:11 pm
Thank you :)
 
koolkat101love said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 7:14 pm
I really connected with this poem because people think of these things almost every day and we don't really understand why these things happen. I really liked it. It was short, sweet, and to the point
 
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