Breathe Out

March 28, 2012
By eternal_sunshine SILVER, Minnetonka, Minnesota
eternal_sunshine SILVER, Minnetonka, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh, and the world laughs with you;
Weep, and you weep alone.
For the sad old earth must borrow it's mirth,
But has trouble enough of its own.


I’m at a healthy weight,
but I wish I was thinner
I”ll never stop thinking about the first boy who broke my heart
I think that buying more clothes will
make me happy
I constantly underestimate myself
I constantly second guess myself
For one reason or another,
I am jealous of everyone
Ecstatic can turn to devastated
within seconds
My trust and innocence have been destroyed
I look for happiness in the eyes of strangers
I have made countless mistakes
and the best thing I have ever come to realize is that
I am completely normal


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Ariya GOLD said...
on Jun. 28 2012 at 2:17 pm
Ariya GOLD, Charleston, South Carolina
12 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some men just want to watch the world burn.
-Alfred (Batman Begins)

I like the poem for the most part.  I love the honesty and how I can completely relate to it.  The only thing I don't really like is the last line.  I'm not completly sure why but it doesn't really go with tone of the poem and how you (like me and the rest of the world) have problems with exepting yourself.  That may just be me and otherwise this is a really good poem.

on Apr. 10 2012 at 8:38 pm
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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hmm i dont know about this one. i kinda feel it was a bit all over the place. try to stick to one topic it usually helps the reader to become a bit more interested. good job though!

on Apr. 10 2012 at 5:15 pm
gb12197 PLATINUM, Bridgeport, Pennsylvania
20 articles 3 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"next time you feel like a failure, think about how you are alive, and you have the opportunity to be successful."

"i don't have an attitude, i have a personality you can't handle"

"i am weird"

there is so much honesty and emotion in this poem, and it is honestly amazing. you give a great sense of what you are actually feeling to the reader, and i love this poem.

on Apr. 8 2012 at 11:53 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

That's great!  Just how some of us feel or at least bits and parts of that.  Keep writing!!!

on Apr. 6 2012 at 10:12 pm
eternal_sunshine SILVER, Minnetonka, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh, and the world laughs with you;
Weep, and you weep alone.
For the sad old earth must borrow it's mirth,
But has trouble enough of its own.

Thanks! :)

on Apr. 6 2012 at 1:46 pm
wordbeater SILVER, Sharpsburg, Georgia
6 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Truth is beauty and beauty truth, that is all ye know on earth and all ye need to know.

Keats

I like how honest this is! 


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