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Forget the grudges, the drama, and all nonsense. 
The night has just been born so why ruin it with foolishness. 
We don't need the so called "glitz and glamor" of whatever the world is advertising. 
All we need are the simple things like Love and each other. 
Hatred, Gone. Envy, Demolished. Prejudiced, Vanquished. Greed, Disappeared. 
A lesson both young and old can learn. 
The moon doesn't discriminate upon race, religion, gender, or age. 
It simply does its task of rising and descending sharing it's brightness with everyone to light the path so we can see. 
If only it could enlighten some of the concepts of the "darkness"



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snowleopard100 said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 9:11 am
I love the comparison between man's attitudes and nature's. It gave me a new perspective and in saying that, fantasting job with this!!!!
 
eternal_sunshine said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 5:13 pm
This one is quite lovely. I like the line "The night has just been born." Nice and unique sentence! Nice closing line also. This flows well, great job :)
 
hippiechick99 said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 1:15 pm
I really loved this poem. I could imagine your thoughts and feelings while reading it; very inspiring.
 
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