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I set out to do twenty,
I only do ten;
I set out to run the full course,
I only run half;
I set out with a heart full of adventure,
But I stop at the first obstacle;
I have more than ten forts in my yard,
Not one is finished;
I tried a diet,
Sorry, chocolate called my name;
I put up a Christmas tree,
I only bought lights;
I tried writing a novel,
There was no ending;
I attempted reading a book,
I lost it the next day;
I played a game,
But I got tired and started walking;
In everything I did, finishing was always a problem
Just like I didn’t finish this
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beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 7:25 am
Funny poem~ It's great! We all half finish stuff, so many will be able to relate to your poem.
 
I_aint_Juliet said...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 5:05 pm
Wonderful! I think its great!
 
Josika.Nav said...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 11:50 am
hey! nice one !! it is smug and funny at the same time , i lke that :). lol. everytime i try dieting chocolate calls my name too XD. great work and keep writing !!
 
Izzyxoxo798 said...
Apr. 7, 2012 at 5:23 pm
nice poem i like how you didnt finish anything haha great job
 
Poetpassion said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 2:19 am
you finished the poem perfectly well,
great effort, amazing poem.....
 
-Sammie- said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 10:45 pm
Wow!!!!! That was an AMAZING poem!!!!! I totally didn't see the ending coming it was so funny! This is a great poem it SO deserves to be published!!!
 
SilverSun said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 8:01 pm
LOVE IT! wow i felt like u were describing me because i totally do this!! You totally played off human ways. Nice job! I also really liked how simply simple it was!
 
AlaskaGrown said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 7:49 pm
I really love this!!! The ending totally suprised me!!!! I love it!!!!
 
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