April 4, 2012
Crash, bang, roar,
Peace, quiet, radiance,
Rain is
Rain was
Rain always is
Without rain there is no
Sustain the rain.

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Walter N. said...
Jul. 10, 2012 at 3:51 pm
guess who xD
hippiechick99 replied...
Jul. 14, 2012 at 9:37 am
Hmm... no idea XD
beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 3:18 pm
I loved the last line: "Sustain the rain." Great poem~
torilutz8 said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 4:49 pm
Beautiful wording, just a tad confusing. 5 stars anyway :)
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 7:25 am
Why is it confusing?
torilutz8 replied...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 3:12 pm
Just a little unclear as to what it's about
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 11:03 am
It's about all the bad things that happen to us in life. But the bad things turn out to make us a better person... that's what I was thinking when I wrote it.
Joshua. said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 11:06 am
I got it! I loved "Without rain there is no rainbows" <3
Dr.Vasilis.W said...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 11:56 am
I liked it! i just dont feel your poem... what are you trying to say? what are you trying to tell these people...? Is there a specific emotion your trying to explain? ...4/5stars! keep at it!
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 3:00 pm
In this poem I'm trying to explain the feelings of loss that soon get better (hence: "Without rain there is no rainbow) sorry you didn't like this poem.
Dr.Vasilis.W replied...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 5:34 pm
No, i liked it :) 
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 9:10 pm

Ok do you get it now???


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