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Rainbows

Crash, bang, roar,
rain.
Peace, quiet, radiance,
colors.
Rain is
Suffering.
Rain was
Loss.
Rain always is
Tears.
Without rain there is no
rainbow.
Sustain the rain.



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Walter N. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 10, 2012 at 3:51 pm:
guess who xD
 
hippiechick99 replied...
Jul. 14, 2012 at 9:37 am :
Hmm... no idea XD
 
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beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 3:18 pm:
I loved the last line: "Sustain the rain." Great poem~
 
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torilutz8 said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 4:49 pm:
Beautiful wording, just a tad confusing. 5 stars anyway :)
 
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 7:25 am :
Why is it confusing?
 
torilutz8 replied...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 3:12 pm :
Just a little unclear as to what it's about
 
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 11:03 am :
It's about all the bad things that happen to us in life. But the bad things turn out to make us a better person... that's what I was thinking when I wrote it.
 
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Joshua. said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 11:06 am:
I got it! I loved "Without rain there is no rainbows" <3
 
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Dr.Vasilis.W said...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 11:56 am:
I liked it! i just dont feel your poem... what are you trying to say? what are you trying to tell these people...? Is there a specific emotion your trying to explain? ...4/5stars! keep at it!
 
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 3:00 pm :
In this poem I'm trying to explain the feelings of loss that soon get better (hence: "Without rain there is no rainbow) sorry you didn't like this poem.
 
Dr.Vasilis.W replied...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 5:34 pm :
No, i liked it :) 
 
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 9:10 pm :

Ok do you get it now???

 

 
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