Rainbows

April 4, 2012
By hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson


Crash, bang, roar,
rain.
Peace, quiet, radiance,
colors.
Rain is
Suffering.
Rain was
Loss.
Rain always is
Tears.
Without rain there is no
rainbow.
Sustain the rain.



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on Jul. 14 2012 at 9:37 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

Hmm... no idea XD

on Jul. 10 2012 at 3:51 pm
TheLastShadowChaos BRONZE, Hohenwald, Tennessee
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guess who xD

on Apr. 21 2012 at 11:03 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

It's about all the bad things that happen to us in life. But the bad things turn out to make us a better person... that's what I was thinking when I wrote it.

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on Apr. 19 2012 at 3:12 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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Just a little unclear as to what it's about

on Apr. 19 2012 at 7:25 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

Why is it confusing?

on Apr. 18 2012 at 3:18 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

I loved the last line: "Sustain the rain." Great poem~

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on Apr. 16 2012 at 4:49 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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Beautiful wording, just a tad confusing. 5 stars anyway :)

Joshua. GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2012 at 11:06 am
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?" - Hunter S Tompson

I got it! I loved "Without rain there is no rainbows" <3

on Apr. 9 2012 at 9:10 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

Ok do you get it now???

 


Dr.Vasilis.W said...
on Apr. 9 2012 at 5:34 pm
No, i liked it :) 

on Apr. 9 2012 at 3:00 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

In this poem I'm trying to explain the feelings of loss that soon get better (hence: "Without rain there is no rainbow) sorry you didn't like this poem.

Dr.Vasilis.W said...
on Apr. 9 2012 at 11:56 am
I liked it! i just dont feel your poem... what are you trying to say? what are you trying to tell these people...? Is there a specific emotion your trying to explain? ...4/5stars! keep at it!




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