April 4, 2012
A melody fills the space
not a drop left empty.
Sweet yet sour.
It blurs and fades...
Just as watercolors after a rain.
Twists and turns.
But always returns by my side.
Beautiful joy.
Beautiful sadness.
A melody fills the space,
never a drop left empty.

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IMAdreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 23, 2012 at 12:05 pm
hippiechick99 replied...
Jul. 4, 2012 at 3:34 pm
Thaaank you! this was actually the first poem I ever wrote. Glad it was enjoyed :)
teamo14 said...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 9:38 am
I like this :)
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 10:17 am

Thank you.


torilutz8 said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 4:47 pm
Such pretty words, especially melancholy. Great word choice 
Joshua. said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 11:04 am
Really like it. Very deep. 
Scribbler-of-Dreams This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 1:32 pm
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 7:00 pm
Thank you!! I really appreciate the feedback.
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