We Are Silence

April 3, 2012
Voices crawl among the Quiet,
Such desire hidden behind the words...

Breathing away Innocence,
Every dream,
Who am I?
What have we become?
My darling...

Pale eyes lack understanding,
Searching underneath the screams,
But nothing is found,

We Are Silence.

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bookishrose said...
May 16, 2012 at 8:01 pm
This is really something. Very honest. Incredible way with words. (:
TapTap said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 9:40 pm
If you ever need a poem reader alouder I would so do it cause i just read this poem to myself three times over and I LOVE it!! Fantastical job Girlie.
WrittenEmotions replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 10:03 pm
Go ahead!!!
EmmettLaFave said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 4:31 pm
Very moving and extraordinarily powerful. This simple style is hard to pull off well, but when it is, it makes the most impacted, and that was perfected here. And cool picture.
PoetryMaster said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 12:49 pm
This is so powerful
recurring_resilience said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 10:44 am
Pale eyes don't always lack understanding. It takes a cold bastard to put someone through this and know what they're doing.
Sapphire1225 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 11:27 pm

you know when I started reading this, the voice inside my head that read it was a whisper. This is simply beautiful :)

Can u check out my poem 'R.M.S.Titanic' ? Thanks :)

bloodroselove said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 11:19 pm
can anyone say 5/5 stars? i love this poem! you have such a talent. this is one of my favorites from you
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 10:20 pm
This is amazing!!! Its my favorite of all of yours I've read :)
Wonderment said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 10:08 pm
Wow. I love the word choice. The pauses. Just nice.
SilverSun said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 8:08 pm
I like how u always use darling on every poem. its like a signiture of ur syle. So pretty. I really have no idea how u write poetry so goooood!!!! :) :)
SilverSun replied...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 11:18 am
Hi we r poem echanging, but i already read and 5/5 starred it! :) Heres another comment tho, and I did reread it... still amazing!
SilverSun replied...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 11:18 am
whoops---- *exchanging
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