Her Final Kiss

April 3, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...


Gentle confessions release the sunlight,
In your smile...
Truth speaks so softly,
Running away,
So far...

Forgetting who you are,
As Shadows steal the glittering silver,
My love...
Oh, my love...
Say you believe...
In me.
Yourself.

Don't let me go,
Beneath the waves of seduction,
Darkness.
...Isolation.

Ragged breathing whispers to a falling heart,
Beating below trembling skin,
As comfort descends the final time,
From your kiss of deception...

"I love you..."
Spoken so passionately,
But darling... Why lie?


The author's comments:
For someone who I thought was only mine... <3

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on Apr. 21 2012 at 2:18 am
SweetSandyFlower GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Not everyone has to go to college because ..hello!.. PIZZAS DONT DELIVER THEMSELVES!!!!

You are so so so so talented i love this one! deffinaitely one of my fasvorites!

on Apr. 6 2012 at 10:16 pm
bloodroselove SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
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WOW! definetly one of my favorite ive seen on this whole site. amazing job whith this poem i love it...lies taste so sweet and sting so bitter

on Apr. 6 2012 at 10:17 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

Why lie?
Because lies taste so sweet...

on Apr. 5 2012 at 10:33 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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Again, I love it.

on Apr. 5 2012 at 10:22 pm
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius.
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring.\"
-Marilyn Monroe

This is so, so, incredibly amazing!!! And i can absolutely relate to it- I LOVE THIS

on Apr. 5 2012 at 8:00 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

on Apr. 5 2012 at 8:00 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thank you!!!!!!!!!

on Apr. 5 2012 at 7:55 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

""I love you..."
Spoken so passionately,
But darling... Why lie?"

I LOVE THIS PART! I LOVE THIS POEM! AWESPME JOB!!!! this is SO going on my favorites!






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