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Her Final Kiss

Gentle confessions release the sunlight,
In your smile...
Truth speaks so softly,
Running away,
So far...

Forgetting who you are,
As Shadows steal the glittering silver,
My love...
Oh, my love...
Say you believe...
In me.
Yourself.

Don't let me go,
Beneath the waves of seduction,
Darkness.
...Isolation.

Ragged breathing whispers to a falling heart,
Beating below trembling skin,
As comfort descends the final time,
From your kiss of deception...

"I love you..."
Spoken so passionately,
But darling... Why lie?




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bloodroselove said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 10:16 pm:
WOW! definetly one of my favorite ive seen on this whole site. amazing job whith this poem i love it...lies taste so sweet and sting so bitter
 
SweetSandyFlower replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 2:18 am :
You are so so so so talented i love this one! deffinaitely one of my fasvorites!
 
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recurring_resilience said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 10:17 am:
Why lie?
Because lies taste so sweet...
 
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Wonderment said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 10:33 pm:
Again, I love it.
 
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TheGirlWhoReachesForStars said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 10:22 pm:
This is so, so, incredibly amazing!!! And i can absolutely relate to it- I LOVE THIS
 
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AlaskaGrownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 8:00 pm:
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
 
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SilverSunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 7:55 pm:

""I love you..."
Spoken so passionately,
But darling... Why lie?"

I LOVE THIS PART! I LOVE THIS POEM! AWESPME JOB!!!! this is SO going on my favorites!


 
WrittenEmotionsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 8:00 pm :
Thank you!!!!!!!!!
 
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