The Fall

April 3, 2012
Through the clouds we fall.
As our rainbows rip through the atmosphere.
We fall.
We all fall...
Gray influences may weaken and fade our brilliance on the way down.
It cannot be avoided.
We all fall.
Our love strengthens us though we still fall.
pain and suffering may tear through our souls.
Our spirits.
Our dreams.
We have fallen.
Ever falling.
But unfaded.

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ShahiroThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 6, 2012 at 8:56 am
i love this and i like what you said in your comment to Madu "when life wont play along change the rules". is that your own quote? or someone elses cus i think ive heard it before..... will  u please check out my work????
B.Madu said...
Jul. 14, 2012 at 6:39 am
this is amazing hippie! do you know you've made me stop and think? after that conversation with you i'm starting to believe in God.  will u also pls read my work? 
hippiechick99 replied...
Jul. 14, 2012 at 9:39 am
I'm really glad. Knowing that I've done something to help anyone makes me feel like I'm doing some things right... When life won't play along, change the rules
walternash3 said...
Jul. 12, 2012 at 6:57 pm
this is an amazing poem, Hippie :3
hippiechick99 replied...
Jul. 14, 2012 at 9:39 am
Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed reading :3
somerandomperson said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 11:27 pm
Love the imagry! Your poem reminded that we will fall and go through bad times but we will get through it
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 10:16 am
That's exactly what I was going for. I'm glad you got my point :)
torilutz8 said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 4:46 pm
Really nice imagery. I really like it :)
Joshua. said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 11:10 am
I love how with your poems you have to think deeper than whats there. Keep writing. You have a gift. 
Nemaidez said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 8:56 pm
Did my last comment go through? Anyway it basicaly said I love comprehensiveness & depth of your poem.
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 8:23 am
Thank you, the feedback is appretiated.
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