Memories from the backyard garden!

April 4, 2012
By compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.


I look back into my memories,
like a stroll in to the backyard garden,
memories of both bad and good ,
like weeds and like lilies,
treasuring the good from the bad.
Memories of warm togetherness and missing aways,
like the grass,
that withers away as you laze to dwell in its beauty.The moments that didn't count but turned to be unique,
like the moth in the garden that turned to be a butterfly!

Everyday is a new chance and a blessing,
like the sun shines its grace anew every dawn,

every past is a memory cherishable,
like the soil that losses it fertility , that never returns.
through the past to the present
and so to the future,
its you,Dear God, that makes everything beautiful and cherishable.


The author's comments:
i penned this poem based on how i feel about my memories from childhood and how every past will be just sweet.

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on Apr. 5 2014 at 9:27 am
AMAZINGSPIDEY, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
ROSES ARE GAY
VIOLETS ARE GAYER
F THIS POEM
LISTEN TO SLAYER

wow just wow. Your words are like powerful and mature lol idk how to describe it but its f'ckin' wonderful

on Nov. 5 2013 at 9:25 am
KaylaaLovee GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
14 articles 1 photo 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty. Madness is genius. And its better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring. And when it comes down to it, I let them think what they want. If they care enough to bother with what I do, I'm already better than them."

Love the way you describe looking at your memories. it makes them seem like more is there than what really is. (that sounds confusing haha)

on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:41 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

great work

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:40 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
19 articles 0 photos 420 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

Very Nice... Keep It Up!!!

on Aug. 13 2012 at 11:00 am
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
8 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

I like the content, it's really sweet :D Good job.

on Aug. 13 2012 at 10:11 am
chefgirl BRONZE, ?, Illinois
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Phillipians 4:13: I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me!

I like the message. The delivery not so much. I like the point of it and it speaks. I just wish you didn't use like good and bad just add more colorful words and it will totally amp it up.

Zayyy BRONZE said...
on Aug. 11 2012 at 7:14 am
Zayyy BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
2 articles 1 photo 15 comments
*AS NAPOLEON DYNAMITE* This is freakin sweeeeeeet

on Jul. 3 2012 at 4:23 am
Madu_Bala BRONZE, Colombo, Other
4 articles 1 photo 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
To unpathed waters, undreamed shores - Shakespeare

What can be more tragic than to feel the boundlessness of the surrounding beauty and to be able to see in it its underlying mystery... and yet to be aware of your own inability to express these large feelings… Isaak Levitan

compassion, this is awsome. I checked out your profile and it seems like we have a lot in common. You are an indian? cool, I'm a srilankan tamil.

on Jun. 18 2012 at 2:17 am
Pika_Princess, Escondido, California
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Memories...a beautiful topic, and you conveyed it so well. I have to admit your word choice is really good and so are your themes. They're also so relateable. 

on Jun. 5 2012 at 12:24 am
colormenerdy GOLD, Uniontown, Ohio
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Beautiful! 

on Jun. 4 2012 at 6:29 am
SugarcoatIt BRONZE, Delhi, Other
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments
I love the comparrision you've made. But if you could cut the first stanza into 2 individual stanza's then I am sure it'll be more  catchy! I love the poem on the whole! TRUE AND ORIGINAL!

AutumnC GOLD said...
on Jun. 2 2012 at 10:02 am
AutumnC GOLD, Mystic Ln, North Carolina
10 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
We were all put on this love to care and love about one another; not to hate, belittle and destroy each other.

wow that rly good

on May. 31 2012 at 6:28 am
starrynightangel BRONZE, Muscat, Other
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nostalgia is a seductive liar.

Sweet poem. Really liked it. Please keep writing.. you have got talent!

on May. 29 2012 at 11:06 am
ignorance_is_bliss PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
27 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This is what it is, this is who I am
This is where I finally take my stand
I didn't wanna fall but I about to crawl
I met the one with two scarred hands"

-Newsboys, Born Again

i love how you included God in the poem, as he is around everything. luv ur writing:)!!!

 


on May. 24 2012 at 6:22 am
iamawesomeK SILVER, Wilmington, Delaware
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am sure I won't be able to fit that many quotes in here.

I absolutely loved this poem. Nice comparision

on May. 24 2012 at 5:51 am
iluvbubbles SILVER, Olathe, Kansas
7 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Until I die I say farewell

its amazing i like how everything was compared to something else

on May. 23 2012 at 10:06 am
Briannah SILVER, Whitehall, New York
8 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some call me fearless. I really just ignore the fear.

Compassion I really like this poem. It's very good thanks for letting me read it.

DanielM said...
on May. 23 2012 at 8:14 am
Well written and very Nice. good job.

on May. 20 2012 at 12:25 pm
Wildflower30 SILVER, Kolkata, Other
8 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
Create your own sayings, for only then do they make sense most. ---- Me

Ah, well, this was simply pleasant and very, very pretty! :) 

gleek1234 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2012 at 9:12 am
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
17 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

very well done i also read the one about your grandma omg so sad i am so sorry you and your family has to go through that.:)best of luck:)


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