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I look back into my memories,
like a stroll in to the backyard garden,
memories of both bad and good ,
like weeds and like lilies,
treasuring the good from the bad.
Memories of warm togetherness and missing aways,
like the grass,
that withers away as you laze to dwell in its beauty.The moments that didn't count but turned to be unique,
like the moth in the garden that turned to be a butterfly!

Everyday is a new chance and a blessing,
like the sun shines its grace anew every dawn,

every past is a memory cherishable,
like the soil that losses it fertility , that never returns.
through the past to the present
and so to the future,
its you,Dear God, that makes everything beautiful and cherishable.



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AMAZINGSPIDEY said...
Apr. 5 at 9:27 am
wow just wow. Your words are like powerful and mature lol idk how to describe it but its f'ckin' wonderful
 
KaylaaLovee said...
Nov. 5, 2013 at 9:25 am
Love the way you describe looking at your memories. it makes them seem like more is there than what really is. (that sounds confusing haha)
 
Hamzawaseem said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 8:41 am
great work
 
Zoya_Khan said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 8:40 am
Very Nice... Keep It Up!!!
 
DedicatedDetermination said...
Aug. 13, 2012 at 11:00 am
I like the content, it's really sweet :D Good job.
 
chefgirl said...
Aug. 13, 2012 at 10:11 am
I like the message. The delivery not so much. I like the point of it and it speaks. I just wish you didn't use like good and bad just add more colorful words and it will totally amp it up.
 
The-Amazing-Spider-ManThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 7:14 am
*AS NAPOLEON DYNAMITE* This is freakin sweeeeeeet
 
B.Madu said...
Jul. 3, 2012 at 4:23 am
compassion, this is awsome. I checked out your profile and it seems like we have a lot in common. You are an indian? cool, I'm a srilankan tamil.
 
Black_Rose_Princess said...
Jun. 18, 2012 at 2:17 am
Memories...a beautiful topic, and you conveyed it so well. I have to admit your word choice is really good and so are your themes. They're also so relateable. 
 
colormenerdy said...
Jun. 5, 2012 at 12:24 am
Beautiful! 
 
SugarcoatIt said...
Jun. 4, 2012 at 6:29 am
I love the comparrision you've made. But if you could cut the first stanza into 2 individual stanza's then I am sure it'll be more  catchy! I love the poem on the whole! TRUE AND ORIGINAL!
 
Autumn1234This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 2, 2012 at 10:02 am
wow that rly good
 
Heartbrokengurl said...
May 31, 2012 at 6:28 am
Sweet poem. Really liked it. Please keep writing.. you have got talent!
 
free2beme said...
May 29, 2012 at 11:06 am

i love how you included God in the poem, as he is around everything. luv ur writing:)!!!

 

 
iamthebest said...
May 24, 2012 at 6:22 am
I absolutely loved this poem. Nice comparision
 
iluvbubbles said...
May 24, 2012 at 5:51 am
its amazing i like how everything was compared to something else
 
Briannah said...
May 23, 2012 at 10:06 am
Compassion I really like this poem. It's very good thanks for letting me read it.
 
DanielM said...
May 23, 2012 at 8:14 am
Well written and very Nice. good job.
 
Wildflower30 said...
May 20, 2012 at 12:25 pm
Ah, well, this was simply pleasant and very, very pretty! :) 
 
gleek1234 said...
May 12, 2012 at 9:12 am
very well done i also read the one about your grandma omg so sad i am so sorry you and your family has to go through that.:)best of luck:)
 
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