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The rush and torrents close in.
A safety net is thrown from above.
Waves crash and pound,
way over my head.
Still I don't reach out
or take hold.
"Please,"
I murmur.
"Please."
My choice.
My life.
My wrongdoing.
Always ignoring.
Wanting, but not grasping.
Never grasping.
As the torrents close in
I reach out a hand.




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walternash3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 23, 2012 at 8:31 pm:
this is really good! keep writing, Dani!
 
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torilutz8 said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 4:46 pm:
Love it. Keep up the good work. :)
 
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 7:46 pm :

Thank you!!

 

 
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Joshua. said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 11:02 am:
I really like reading your work Hippiechick!
 
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 5:34 pm :
Thanks, I really appreciate all the feedback :))
 
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Scribbler-of-DreamsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 1:29 pm:
Simpleand so beautiful. Only words to describe it..
 
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NemaidezThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 9:00 pm:
This isn't as kindred 2 me as the last one but I can feel a meaning in it.
 
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