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A shimmer
A sparkle
A twinkle...

Gone.

Run to chase it,
the wind in your hair.
Once was found,
now is lost...

Gone.

But always run to chase it.




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AriShineThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 21, 2012 at 9:49 am:
This is beautiful! I love the message, and I love the simplicity. Keep it up!
 
hippiechick99 replied...
Jul. 4, 2012 at 3:41 pm :
Yes, my earlier poems were much shorter than the ones I tend to write now. But every once in a while I try to keep it simple... Thanks for reading :)
 
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torilutz8 said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 4:52 pm:
Beautiful yet an unclear meaning. Try clarifying what you mean to evoke more emotion and response from your reader, everyone loves a poem they can easily relate to a personal experience, especially if it's powerful.
 
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Apr. 16, 2012 at 7:47 pm :
Very true...I'll try that in my future poems. But to me poetry is all about finding your own meaning, so I don't want to give to much away.
 
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Joshua. said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 11:00 am:
Dont really know what its talking about. But thats okay. Its just beautiful. :)
 
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 5:36 pm :
I'm mostly talking about my lost dreams that people put down all the time...but I still run to chase them.
 
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