April 4, 2012
Shades of
all around me.
Shades of
have never found me.
What goes up
must come down.
A meadow in spring
always reaches winter.
While you're in the clouds
enjoy the rush.
Enjoy the light.
While it still exists.

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so_joy said...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 10:00 pm
Beautiful! Magnificent job! You're very talented. Please read,rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!
LongLazyDays55 said...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 12:02 pm
Amazing! Such a colourful poem with a clear message! Keep writing! :)
ShadowAngel2468 said...
Jul. 16, 2012 at 6:21 pm
that was so powerful, percise and perfect, loved it!
torilutz8 said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 4:50 pm
Nice and intense. Meaning a tad unclear but really powerful regardless and nice idea.
Joshua. said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 10:56 am

Love it!

Kinda reminds me of a writer i know ;) lol

hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 5:38 pm
Yup, I was a depressed little 13 year old. Oh well, I got over it.
Joshua. replied...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 7:41 pm
How old are you now?
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 6:39 pm
Still 13, just not depressed :P
DaisyAngel said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 2:33 pm
This was really interesting! Keep writing!
J-Nav said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 9:37 am
hey! nice one. i like the way your short sentences add a certain fluidity to the poem. great work and keep writing :)
Nemaidez said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 9:09 pm
Haha, I love this.
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 8:24 am
lol, Why is it funny?? It's meant to be sad and serious.
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