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Shades

Shades of
blue,
gray,
black,
all around me.
Shades of
pink,
yellow,
green,
have never found me.
Lifting,
floating,
soaring,
falling.
What goes up
must come down.
A meadow in spring
always reaches winter.
While you're in the clouds
enjoy the rush.
Enjoy the light.
While it still exists.




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so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 10:00 pm:
Beautiful! Magnificent job! You're very talented. Please read,rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!
 
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LongLazyDays55 said...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 12:02 pm:
Amazing! Such a colourful poem with a clear message! Keep writing! :)
 
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ShadowAngel2468 said...
Jul. 16, 2012 at 6:21 pm:
that was so powerful, percise and perfect, loved it!
 
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torilutz8 said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 4:50 pm:
Nice and intense. Meaning a tad unclear but really powerful regardless and nice idea.
 
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Joshua. said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 10:56 am:

Love it!

Kinda reminds me of a writer i know ;) lol

 
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 5:38 pm :
Yup, I was a depressed little 13 year old. Oh well, I got over it.
 
Joshua. replied...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 7:41 pm :
How old are you now?
 
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 6:39 pm :
Still 13, just not depressed :P
 
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DaisyAngel said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 2:33 pm:
This was really interesting! Keep writing!
 
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J-Nav said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 9:37 am:
hey! nice one. i like the way your short sentences add a certain fluidity to the poem. great work and keep writing :)
 
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Nemaidez said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 9:09 pm:
Haha, I love this.
 
hippiechick99 replied...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 8:24 am :
lol, Why is it funny?? It's meant to be sad and serious.
 
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