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Hollow Inside

Hollow, hollow.
As a long ago fallen tree.
Empty inside.
Never to be refilled.
Once overflowing with
Love,
Life,
Feeling.

Dead.

No one loves the soulless
or that without substance.
One wrong choice.
One deadly worm.
Always makes all loose themselves to those of ill mind.
Many give up.
Give up their lives to aid the wrong in wrongdoing.
As they try to persuade them as they did me.
Still I don't stand up or fight for the soon-to-be-pitted.
For I am empty myself.
Hollow, hollow
inside.



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IMAdreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 23, 2012 at 11:56 am:

i like how sure your poem is. and the twist on heroism and such...

ps. please check out my work???????

 
ShadowAngel2468 replied...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 9:32 pm :

that was so powerful and profoundly riviting,i totally loved it

pls read an entry or two of mine if you can

Thanks!

 
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LaceeJade This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 29, 2012 at 6:11 pm:
I love poems that have stong meanings in a simple description. Great job!
 
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torilutz8 said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 5:01 pm:
Awesome imagery and repetition. I can totally relate to this. Good job :)
 
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Joshua. said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 10:53 am:
This is really great! I like the hollow Repetiton. :)
 
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hippiechick99 said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 8:22 am:
Yes actually. It symbolizes what happens when you make a wrong choice (deadly worm.) It eats you up inside and you go over to the darkness to help them besause youv'e given up all hope of redemtion.
 
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JustFriends939This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 7:27 am:
This is really good. Is there a hidden meaning other than a hollow tree?
 
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