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I watched a butterfly escape
a silent furrow like a gasp.
I saw it creep out slowly
and carefully
I saw it unfold wet, fragile
They dangled helplessly at its
I watched them fill with blood
and pull upright
I saw beauty born from a
hanging casket
I saw the weak become strong.
I saw it spread its wings, and fly. `

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bearsfan654 said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 3:37 pm
I love the descriptive imagery! I felt I could see the butterfly! Great poem!
gb12197 said...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 10:00 pm
i love how descriptive you are. great imagery! your writing is really great :)
dark_armor1This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 8:51 pm
wow this one was amazing! my favorite from urs actually :) good job!
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile said...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 2:00 pm
you're a great writer! and i love this peice so much its so inspirational!
Allicat001 said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 6:44 pm
One of the best poems I've ever read!  5 of 5 stars! 
LadyJaneGrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 4:59 pm
This is the third poem I've read from you, and I envy your talent. How anyone could describe something so simply so beautifully and so uniquely is beyond me. Please don't ever stop writing! :)
Epiclyawesome said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 11:19 am
I don't usually like poetry that much, but I really liked this peice. It's absolutly beautiful. Excellent job :)
eternal_sunshine said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 10:53 am
I especially love this one. You're descriptions are so beautiful, but yet very life like and realisitic. You have such a unique way of writing, I really love the line "I saw the weak become strong." Awesome job!
wordbeater replied...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 2:23 pm
Thanks for the comments! I really appreciate that you took the time to read my stuff! :)
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