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Good bye Josh
Good bye bestfriend
Leaving me left behind to serve this country that you love
Ten years ago you were not thinking about military
Sandbox buddies
We stand here to say our good byes and I don’t know what to do
Best friend
You are leaving for the Navy
You wont be back
Chicago is swallowing you up whole and wont spit you back
You’re my BFF
And I want you back
I love you
You are like a brother
<3




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katinthehat said...
Apr. 25, 2012 at 8:58 pm:
wow.. this is so relatable, with tony.. my friend who is doing almost the ame thing.. i like how simplistically you can phrase all that you feel,because i couldnt admit my fear aloud really good job
 
katieRainbows replied...
Apr. 25, 2012 at 9:10 pm :

Thanks That means alot

 

 
katinthehat replied...
Apr. 25, 2012 at 9:45 pm :
of couse. no problem girlie stay stong :)
 
katieRainbows replied...
Apr. 25, 2012 at 10:01 pm :
u to ima read ur stuffl8er i just have to have time
 
katinthehat replied...
Apr. 26, 2012 at 11:58 am :
thanks :) means a lot Lol:)
 
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EmmettLaFaveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 24, 2012 at 9:41 pm:
Very good! This is always a great theme, and you captured it in a very simple and beautiful way, 5/5.
 
katieRainbows replied...
Apr. 25, 2012 at 9:11 pm :
Thanks for ur support this was very hard to right cuz i have know him so long
 
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SkylerMorningstar said...
Apr. 22, 2012 at 8:26 pm:
i thought it was vary nice and cute :)
 
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ammie said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 9:59 pm:
aw sweety u can still write him, u know that right. =(
 
SweetSandyFlower replied...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 12:37 am :
this is so cute. It makes me miss my BFF
 
Katierainbows replied...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 10:00 am :
AWWW thanks for all ur support love u guys
 
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