A Poem For Nate

March 18, 2012
By BriRose2014 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
BriRose2014 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"A man reserves his true and deepest love not for the species of woman in whose company he finds himself electrified and enkindled, but for that one in whose company he may feel tenderly drowsy."
-George Jean Nathan


A pool of blue crystal, an ocean typhoon
A smile that can break through steel
A melodious mixture of love and friendship
A personality that can lighten any mood
Perfection in its rarest form
What more could one ask?
A gentle kiss to destroy to shroud of the monster I used to be
A kiss to strike the heart with pure faultlessness
Like a dream painted into reality
A true love like this shall never be broken
Not even with the sharpest knife

The author's comments:
This was about Nate, a boy I dated. i wrote this to help remind myself of the things I loved about him during the rough parts in our relationship.

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on Apr. 3 2012 at 6:21 pm
BriRose2014 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"A man reserves his true and deepest love not for the species of woman in whose company he finds himself electrified and enkindled, but for that one in whose company he may feel tenderly drowsy."
-George Jean Nathan

lol thank you!!!

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2012 at 1:00 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

I really like it. The end kind of contradicts "If I Die Young". lol!

on Mar. 30 2012 at 5:17 pm
BriRose2014 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
9 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A man reserves his true and deepest love not for the species of woman in whose company he finds himself electrified and enkindled, but for that one in whose company he may feel tenderly drowsy."
-George Jean Nathan

thank you! :D

on Mar. 30 2012 at 5:03 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Your imagery and language are exquisite!!!!!!! I am impressed, I love this! :D


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