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A Poem For Nate

A pool of blue crystal, an ocean typhoon
A smile that can break through steel
A melodious mixture of love and friendship
A personality that can lighten any mood
Perfection in its rarest form
What more could one ask?
A gentle kiss to destroy to shroud of the monster I used to be
A kiss to strike the heart with pure faultlessness
Like a dream painted into reality
A true love like this shall never be broken
Not even with the sharpest knife



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KrystalT said...
Apr. 1, 2012 at 1:00 pm:
I really like it. The end kind of contradicts "If I Die Young". lol!
 
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Apr. 3, 2012 at 6:21 pm :
lol thank you!!!
 
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IamtheshyStargirl said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 5:03 pm:
Your imagery and language are exquisite!!!!!!! I am impressed, I love this! :D
 
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Mar. 30, 2012 at 5:17 pm :
thank you! :D
 
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