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Love me to death

March 18, 2012
By Jasmiinhope GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
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What if you could lose weight by feeling pain? Do you know how skinny i would be?

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Your skin is like sliding your hand
across the calm warm water
And i get a dangerous chill goes through me
like an electric shock, but so good i want more

When i see you, its the most
Wonderful sight to see
and it sends dangerous
amounts of adrenaline
through my fragile body

When i hear your voice, it is like
hearing the softest sound ever to be heard
and it puts me into the deepest sleep
it puts me into a four month coma

And when you kiss me, i cant breath
I hyperventilate, and my heart stops
forever
and you love me to death

© Susan R., Iselin, NJ

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