Detours

March 27, 2012
By assel11 SILVER, Purchase, New York
assel11 SILVER, Purchase, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Every flower must grow through dirt."


Wherever the path may lead,
There’s only one place where the journey began.
And all the twists and turns,
Each fork in the road,
They’re just detours on the route home.



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on Mar. 29 2012 at 12:20 am
WritingVincent SILVER, Calgary, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything comes from something."

I felt like this poem had a meaning that wasn't completely conveyed; I liked it, but I felt that you could have given it more I suppose. Nonetheless, I enjoyed the message given!

So, let’s run it through my personal rating system!

Form:  3/5 stars
Word usage:  3/5 stars
Language convention:  5/5 stars

Total stars:  3.5/5 stars



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