The Past

March 25, 2012
By ashh12 SILVER, Uhrisville, Ohio
ashh12 SILVER, Uhrisville, Ohio
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You could say I'm not over you.
I could say your not over me too.
We both know things will never be the same.
So why act like what we had still remains?

Days go by, nothings seemed to change.
My thought of you are still the same.
Strong as ever, it's like your still here with me.
I can't comprehend that we weren't meant to be.


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OldYoungOne said...
on Aug. 8 2013 at 4:54 pm
You seem to have a constant rhyme scheme in your works that don't necassrily wualify as free verse but yet and still its a poem and I like poems :) I would say that maybe because they have end rhymes that you are limited to what you can say so I suggest breaking away from it and trying something new. Extend the poem and this would be a rocking poem, guranteed! I must say I like that the topic is relatable and I myself have felt this many times over in my relationships.


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