you were

March 25, 2012
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when we danced
i was floating on air
when we touched
i was love struck
when we met for the first time
your eyes saw right through me
you were perfect
when you left
i slept for days
thinking about you
about all the things
we could have been
you made me smile
even though
i still think
about you

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SilverSun said...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 11:15 pm
I liked the simplicity, but also the way it drew me in out of sheer interest. Good job!
meandtheuniverse said...
Apr. 3, 2012 at 4:01 pm
I like this, it's really raw and simple! the format is also great
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