you were

March 25, 2012
By smahri25 SILVER, Windsor, Connecticut
smahri25 SILVER, Windsor, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
“One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain.”
― Bob Marley

when we danced
i was floating on air
when we touched
i was love struck
when we met for the first time
your eyes saw right through me
you were perfect
when you left
i slept for days
thinking about you
about all the things
we could have been
you made me smile
even though
i still think
about you

The author's comments:
relationships can be hard but you cant just remember the bad things

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on Apr. 14 2012 at 11:15 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

I liked the simplicity, but also the way it drew me in out of sheer interest. Good job!

meercat BRONZE said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 4:01 pm
meercat BRONZE, Newton, Massachusetts
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I like this, it's really raw and simple! the format is also great

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