Subconcious

March 1, 2012
By krarthurs SILVER, Plymouth, Massachusetts
krarthurs SILVER, Plymouth, Massachusetts
9 articles 3 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
All generous minds have a horror of what are commonly called "Facts". They are the brute beasts of the intellectual domain.
-Thomas Hobbes


drifting somewhere below,
with limbs barely treading,
the current carries you,
in obscure directions.
Daybreak is a foreign sight,
and darkness, all you feel,

simply all you sense,
merely all you know.

Above your head is distant,
yet only inches it proves,
the day the tube is tossed,
the moment you are saved.
You find the inner side,
grip the sacred plastic,
force a final kick,

and wait to resurface.



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on Mar. 30 2012 at 12:14 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Lovely, dark and mysterious and barely understood, the perfect mood.


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