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A girl was walking down the street
very kind to all she meets
with baby blue eyes and sunshine hair
she stops and looks to make sure noones there
then she crys and crys
through tear filled eyes
for she knows a good friend dies
a friend of love a friend of hope
and shes stuck with pain she cannot cope
then a woman comes with a giant grin
since she knows her plan will win
this woman of hatred, filled with despise
she takes over as a good friend dies
this womans the devil a heart full of coal
is against your friend wich is your soul
i warn you be careful on what you do
or this woman will get you too



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Zoya_Khan said...
Dec. 26, 2012 at 3:08 pm:
This is really very nice... I just love it...!!!
 
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lizerina776 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 18, 2012 at 6:38 pm:
this is a good poem! there are a few minor grammar/spelling things, but overall, you conveyed the message really well, and I liked it :)
 
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Jappyalldayeveryday said...
Jun. 18, 2012 at 6:28 pm:
I really like this, especially the beginning. I can picture everything in my mind, and it flows very smooth, reminding me of a song. Great job!
 
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luvcats22 said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 9:41 am:
awsome poem and i think it's true when some one mocks another. when that happen to me at school i was devestated
 
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bloodroselove said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 11:14 pm:
wow...very good poem! i can feel the emotions radiating off of each word and line awesome job! life is a writers greatest inspiration
 
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