Not As It Seemed

March 22, 2012
By ashh12 SILVER, Uhrisville, Ohio
ashh12 SILVER, Uhrisville, Ohio
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Yeah, I think of you often. You’re in my dreams a lot too. I can’t help it, I love you.
Back then I had it all, everything I ever dreamed. Boy I miss the way things seemed.
It’s too bad you won’t admit it. That you really didn’t quit us before you hit it.
I used to think I wouldn’t forgive you. Sometimes I wish that were still true.
Me and you used to be our song, oh buddy that was so wrong.
Never again will I be able to trust anyone. You had that big of impact on me hunn.
I told you every thought that came into my mind. And now, look what I can’t find.
A friend that’s as true as I thought you were. I can’t thank you enough sir.
Yeah, I use sarcasm pretty much every day. It’s how I am, it’s my way.


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OldYoungOne said...
on Aug. 8 2013 at 4:58 pm
Same thing I as said on the other two applies to this one as well. I would add figurative language to spice this poem up because breakup and heart breaks are commonly posted topics and the way soemone uses thier words to describe the situation make their poem unique. If you are a frank person show it and flow with it. Make heartbreak YOUR topic :) Stay writing.


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