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Insipid

Slowly it creeps up on me
Evil insipidity
I'm wrapped in it's spider web
Waiting for the pain to ebb

I'm a cook without flavor,
A painter who paints no more.
The art was too insipid,
Auctioned when no one would bid

The talented stand alone
All the others stand outshone
Rocked by insipidity
Standing lackluster like me.





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SuNshiNe007 said...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 7:46 am
Amazing! I love the wording you used, Very creative! Hope to read more, 5 stars for you!:) And hey, everything is going to be ok. You may not know me but Im your friend and I care for you!
 
LilZo11 replied...
Mar. 24, 2012 at 1:56 pm
yay! you are really incredible at writing too i must say and i love reading what you write as well, and im uploading a couple more recent ones, i think some of them are more upbeat i think you'll like them so you should check back in a couple days if you want and they might be publshed to the sight
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 7:35 am
Awsome!! I cant wait!! And thanks I really enjoy reading your work too!!
 
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