I envy the way darkness swallows you,
eating out all the light
Wishing
that your stolen shadow
would get up
and walk
beside mine
eating out all the light
Wishing
that your stolen shadow
would get up
and walk
beside mine
NavyCopperQuill
This is a great poem! I love the short and sweet approach. Please write more because this is great!
fluterocker015Love this poem! The words you chose really bring a deeper meaning to them poem! Keep writing! :)
Love this poem! The words you chose really bring a deeper meaning to them poem! Keep writing! :)
HotHotPolkaDOTHi here I am!
I think this is gorgeous, it's short and sweet and the vocabulary is complex. the words just sound so good when they're said out loud, and flow really well. definatly keep writing :D
I think this is gorgeous, it's short and sweet and the vocabulary is complex. the words just sound so good when they're said out loud, and flow really well. definatly keep writing :D
k8hustedThis one is now my FAVORITE!!! Short, but with so much feeling put behind it! Like Like Like! :)
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