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The leaves hanged like hearts
In the lonely breeze of eve,
Dancing in frenzy they had
Passions connected with my heart.
I passed onto them,and whispered
In their little hearts the sorrow
of the world,
They withered and fell down.





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rahi said...
Mar. 20, 2012 at 11:49 am
Nice..poem...how beautifully you have related hearts with the leaves...best use of Simile
 
Absar said...
Mar. 20, 2012 at 11:45 am
wow...great..this poem is relating the human hearts with the leaves...it show how hearts are withered with grief, and fall down with grief like leaves.
 
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