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Hanging Leaves

March 16, 2012
By Zubair-Ali SILVER, Srinagar(State -J&k), Other
Zubair-Ali SILVER, Srinagar(State -J&k), Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't want to leave your dwelling, but intoxication leads me to home"


The leaves hanged like hearts
In the lonely breeze of eve,
Dancing in frenzy they had
Passions connected with my heart.
I passed onto them,and whispered
In their little hearts the sorrow
of the world,
They withered and fell down.



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rahi said...
on Mar. 20 2012 at 11:49 am
Nice..poem...how beautifully you have related hearts with the leaves...best use of Simile

Absar said...
on Mar. 20 2012 at 11:45 am
wow...great..this poem is relating the human hearts with the leaves...it show how hearts are withered with grief, and fall down with grief like leaves.