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Silent Blurs

February 27, 2012
By CelestaCuffrig GOLD, Loveland, Colorado
CelestaCuffrig GOLD, Loveland, Colorado
11 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Inspiration is only as enlightening as you are open to it."


Listening; gone
A silence on time
Actions
Words
Thoughts
Never ending blurs of never ending nothings
Silenced
Caressed by neither roam nor rhyme
Neither good nor evil
Nor triumph or defeat
Silver striated creations of whim
Replacing spaces
Once filled with abundant somethings
Crevice and cracks emptied
Reason obtained
Still
Degraded
Derailed
Mistrusted; mistreated
Never understood
Above but never beyond



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on Nov. 27 2012 at 9:14 pm
theatregirl PLATINUM, Lathrup Village, Michigan
30 articles 12 photos 212 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To thine own self be true," -from Hamlet, a play by Shakespeare.
"I have sworn on the altar of god eternal hostility against all forms of tyranny over the mind of man." - Thomas Jefferson

I love it! It was very nice and it felt deep

on Aug. 16 2012 at 10:10 pm
CelestaCuffrig GOLD, Loveland, Colorado
11 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Inspiration is only as enlightening as you are open to it."

Thanks (: It's grand to know that others appreciate something so close to me as my writing...

on Aug. 16 2012 at 10:07 pm
CelestaCuffrig GOLD, Loveland, Colorado
11 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Inspiration is only as enlightening as you are open to it."

Thanks a lot! This piece has many different meanings for me and I'm thankful for other's imput (x I read some of your work as well! Brilliant. You seem to focus your writing on your present mood which can produce some extremely strong writing!!

on Aug. 15 2012 at 8:41 pm
awesomelyme GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Akthough the truth may hurt, not knowing is the worst kind of punishment.

yur writing contains such strong words and it sounds as though the writer although reppressing her feelings, was keeping such a steady ground as she confornted the silence, i really liked it.

on Aug. 12 2012 at 11:57 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

Very Powerful. I love the chose of words, especially towards the end :). I love the whole poem but my favorite lines are: "Never ending blurs or never ending nothings" "Once filled with abundent somethings// Crevice and craks emptied" Keep up the awesome work :) Please check out my articles :)

on Jul. 19 2012 at 5:23 pm
CelestaCuffrig GOLD, Loveland, Colorado
11 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Inspiration is only as enlightening as you are open to it."

Thank you (: I love your writings as well!

on Jul. 18 2012 at 5:05 pm
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
27 articles 18 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi

Very good! Deep,awesome.


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