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Onomadapia Interpretation of Rain

THRABA-BABOOM!!
…ploink!...
…plink!...ploink!...
…ploink!
Tap tap tap tap!
Tap tap tap tap!
Shhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
A silent flash of blinding light
BOOOOM!!
Tap tap tap tap.
…plink!…plop!..
ploink!




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SallySunshine said...
May 22, 2013 at 5:26 pm:
That was beautiful. :')
 
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SilentNinjaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2013 at 2:25 pm:
Nice descriptive words :)
 
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