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She is more sacred than others
A girl, my sister
She is a wonderful being more rare
More beautiful,
Purer, more perfect
And more delicate than the wildest dreams of any poet
I could never believe her to be
My own
Her beauty is a well, a spring of the purest water-of-life
And to look upon her is to drink, and drink, and drink, and drink again
She is rare,
A perfect, most godly creation
A work of the purest art
A delicate flower that blooms in the liquid light of the very moon
A nature not of this musky world
A personality like that of a biblical maiden
Most gracious and queenly
I find it difficult,
To believer her,
My own




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youngspeare said...
Aug. 28, 2012 at 11:37 am:
wow! It's so beautiful..how often do you find a person who loves their sibling this much!
It's unique and amazing! Keep posting :-) 
 
 
Sarah_Oso This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 7:00 pm :
Yes, Sarah, very beautiful. :) Your love shows through your words.
 
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ShelbyLalaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 26, 2012 at 5:29 pm:
this is beautiful
 
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Mr.Indescribable said...
Aug. 21, 2012 at 8:38 pm:
This is beautifullllll
 
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Hannabug said...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 4:57 pm:
This is so sweet!!!
 
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Heartbrokengurl said...
Jun. 2, 2012 at 11:58 am:
This poem is soo sweet. Shes lucky to have a sister like you :)
 
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rockmafia-611 said...
Apr. 25, 2012 at 12:46 pm:
oow i like it.Good job you should keep writing
 
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FK092495 said...
Apr. 25, 2012 at 12:45 pm:
I love it and so would my sister. Really Good Job!!! :)
 
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SkylerMorningstar said...
Apr. 23, 2012 at 6:17 pm:
i love it. its really cute :)
 
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surfergirl98 said...
Mar. 21, 2012 at 7:02 pm:
wow this is amazing. i dedicate this to my little sister. For you RKK
 
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