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The Great Mistake

February 27, 2012
By Name24 BRONZE, Brampton, Other
Name24 BRONZE, Brampton, Other
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I saw you there across the room
and I started to bloom
I knew what I had to do,
I came to talk to you

I said “How you doing?”
I waited, but you said nothing.
I started to walk away
and I thought today was the day

But then I heard you say
“Please stay”
I was too late,
Because girl you already had a date

I didn't know what to do,
It was hard to look at you.
I realized that I made a mistake,
Oh, how I miss that chocolate cake!

The author's comments:
This piece describes my voice and how I interpret things that are serious and add a quirky side to it.

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on Mar. 29 2012 at 12:03 pm
Carrisma BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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Be yourself and let not some one tell you what you should do but you tell your self what is the right thing to do

i love this yay cake