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Tears streaming down my face
Like a gentle waterfall
All my secrets leaking out
And you read them all

With arms wide open
You were calling
With arms wide open
I came running

My face is wet
My eyes are red
You read my book
With nothing said

The need for speech is growing
But it is hard to say a word
So you went first
“ I love you”
It took me by surprise
And then I realized
“ I love you too”





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In_Love_with_Writing said...
Jan. 6, 2013 at 8:18 pm
Very very beautiful writing. Great job! Please read, rate, and comment on my stories. It means so much to me!
 
writer3499 said...
Sept. 10, 2012 at 3:03 pm
Thanks everyone I really appreciate what you have to say!
 
garshongjasmine said...
Sept. 10, 2012 at 2:40 pm
i hardly read a piece over.. but i read yours over and over and over and over!!! great work... love this  
 
psnipes23 said...
Sept. 9, 2012 at 10:29 pm
that's a very pleasing and relatable piece, very nice work
 
StellaDPloom said...
Aug. 19, 2012 at 8:56 am
Wow! This was so amazing, and beautiful! I love it, good work!
 
Aduke9 said...
Aug. 18, 2012 at 7:33 pm
Wow! This is really good.Great job :)
 
pratsjb said...
Aug. 13, 2012 at 8:11 am
couldn't unerstand the first stanza....but the later ones were appreciable
 
HarryPotterLover30 said...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 5:25 pm
This is really good! I liked it! :) AWESOME!!
 
BookwizardThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 2, 2012 at 1:26 pm
This is really good and I love how you captured the moment. My favorite part is the 2nd verse.
 
BookwizardThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 2, 2012 at 1:26 pm
This is really good and I love how you captured the moment. My favorite part is the 2nd verse.
 
stillheartless This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 19, 2012 at 6:09 pm
This is amazing! I really really like it. Would you mind checking out my work possibly?
 
Free.Living.Winged. replied...
May 12, 2012 at 6:42 pm
Great job! Very emotional! Loved every word! :)(:
 
justlookin said...
Mar. 18, 2012 at 5:51 pm

Great look at a very tight bond

ubroken by "betrayal!"

 
Missy1999 said...
Mar. 13, 2012 at 1:14 pm
This is beautiful!
 
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