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Tears streaming down my face
Like a gentle waterfall
All my secrets leaking out
And you read them all

With arms wide open
You were calling
With arms wide open
I came running

My face is wet
My eyes are red
You read my book
With nothing said

The need for speech is growing
But it is hard to say a word
So you went first
“ I love you”
It took me by surprise
And then I realized
“ I love you too”




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In_Love_with_Writing said...
Jan. 6, 2013 at 8:18 pm:
Very very beautiful writing. Great job! Please read, rate, and comment on my stories. It means so much to me!
 
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writer3499 said...
Sept. 10, 2012 at 3:03 pm:
Thanks everyone I really appreciate what you have to say!
 
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garshongjasmine said...
Sept. 10, 2012 at 2:40 pm:
i hardly read a piece over.. but i read yours over and over and over and over!!! great work... love this  
 
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psnipes23 said...
Sept. 9, 2012 at 10:29 pm:
that's a very pleasing and relatable piece, very nice work
 
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StellaDPloom said...
Aug. 19, 2012 at 8:56 am:
Wow! This was so amazing, and beautiful! I love it, good work!
 
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Aduke9 said...
Aug. 18, 2012 at 7:33 pm:
Wow! This is really good.Great job :)
 
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pratsjb said...
Aug. 13, 2012 at 8:11 am:
couldn't unerstand the first stanza....but the later ones were appreciable
 
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HarryPotterLover30 said...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 5:25 pm:
This is really good! I liked it! :) AWESOME!!
 
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BookwizardThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 2, 2012 at 1:26 pm:
This is really good and I love how you captured the moment. My favorite part is the 2nd verse.
 
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BookwizardThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 2, 2012 at 1:26 pm:
This is really good and I love how you captured the moment. My favorite part is the 2nd verse.
 
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stillheartlessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 19, 2012 at 6:09 pm:
This is amazing! I really really like it. Would you mind checking out my work possibly?
 
Free.Living.Winged.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 12, 2012 at 6:42 pm :
Great job! Very emotional! Loved every word! :)(:
 
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justlookin said...
Mar. 18, 2012 at 5:51 pm:

Great look at a very tight bond

ubroken by "betrayal!"

 
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Missy1999 said...
Mar. 13, 2012 at 1:14 pm:
This is beautiful!
 
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