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Recline On You

March 11, 2012
By Sparki BRONZE, Hardwick, Massachusetts
Sparki BRONZE, Hardwick, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new (Albert Einstein)


RECLINE on YOU

Too weak to cry
Too tired to talk
I keep getting burned
Each time I open my heart

Hurt so jagged
Disquiet so deep
To feel neglected
Makes it hard to see

Are you really able
To handle the truth
For a little while
Can I recline on you

Until I find the courage
To put the pieces back together


The author's comments:
This piece came from a dark moment with a dear friend that I was hoping to reconnect with. It was my chance to put my feelings into words in a productive way.

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Moira said...
on Mar. 13 2012 at 12:18 pm
Beautiful words that capture so much feeling and depth! Amazing.

Hello123 said...
on Mar. 12 2012 at 6:17 pm
Excellent job Jaxon!!!  Keep up the great work and we will soon see you on the poet's circuit!

Aunt Lisa said...
on Mar. 12 2012 at 4:23 pm
What a beautiful poem!  The descriptive language you use really makes the words come alive with meaning and love.           I keep reading it over and over!

surf-side said...
on Mar. 12 2012 at 8:27 am
Excellent poem, very deep.  I have been there - I look forward to following your work.

Fred said...
on Mar. 12 2012 at 4:29 am
Very nice poem Sparki. You have a nice way with words. I hope you share more. Fred

Fred said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 8:06 pm
This is a very nice piece. The feelings come through in your writing. I hope you submit more.

Sparki BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 7:35 pm
Sparki BRONZE, Hardwick, Massachusetts
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new (Albert Einstein)

Sparki, how amazing. You release your feelings in a way that relates to so many. Keep up the great verse. Your poetry is motivating and therapeutic.

Sparki BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 7:13 pm
Sparki BRONZE, Hardwick, Massachusetts
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new (Albert Einstein)

great job sparki. the poem was truly touching. love it and hope to read more of your work!

 sincerely, your secret admirer