March 1, 2012
Oh dreams
Those luscious scenes
Of more than what
Is really seen
Oh nightmare
Lurking in
The dark there
Waiting to pull me
By my hair
Down to hell's
Sleep, the visions you give me

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NickyJ said...
Mar. 12, 2012 at 5:21 pm

I've been reading a lot of your poetry and this one stood out to me most, I gotta say its my favorite of yours.

I notice all your poems have a similar trait, being short and short lined with distinct structure.

I especially like the first part of the poem, and the transition to the Nightmare.

Good Stuff!

Too.Dead.To.Die replied...
Mar. 20, 2012 at 2:14 pm
Thank you NickyJ!! I can't believe you've actually been reading my stuff regularly! That makes me ecstatic that My simple words are worth someone's time :)
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