Dreams

March 1, 2012
By A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u
If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.
If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn't come back it was never yours.
I'm scared to fall and be dropped.


Dreams
Oh dreams
Those luscious scenes
Of more than what
Is really seen
Nightmare
Oh nightmare
Lurking in
The dark there
Waiting to pull me
By my hair
Down to hell's
Fire
Sleep, the visions you give me

The author's comments:
I have no idea what was going on in my head when I wrote this, but it's one of my favorites.

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on Mar. 20 2012 at 2:14 pm
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u
If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.
If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn't come back it was never yours.
I'm scared to fall and be dropped.

Thank you NickyJ!! I can't believe you've actually been reading my stuff regularly! That makes me ecstatic that My simple words are worth someone's time :)

NickyJ BRONZE said...
on Mar. 12 2012 at 5:21 pm
NickyJ BRONZE, Hyde Park, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.” ~Robert Frost

I've been reading a lot of your poetry and this one stood out to me most, I gotta say its my favorite of yours.

I notice all your poems have a similar trait, being short and short lined with distinct structure.

I especially like the first part of the poem, and the transition to the Nightmare.

Good Stuff!



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