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I look around
And what do I see?
But a brown haired boy
Looking at me.

I walk toward him
And sit by the tree
Say just five words,
"Are you looking for me?"

The boys stops dead,
His eyes turn gray,
For the brown haired boy
Has nothing to say

And I wonder what he's thinking
As he falls in the hay,
For death has come
And gone away

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doom.doom.doom.911 said...
Apr. 23, 2012 at 12:19 pm:
this is amazing! how could anyone describe that in better words? death and loss come so suddenly, each when you least expect it, and when it happens, youc an't change how you treated that person.
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team_haymitchThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 14, 2012 at 8:24 am:
Wow. Just wow. How are you not famous yet? I LOVE THIS POEM IT IS SO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!
Mrs.Gosling-Hutcherson replied...
Mar. 14, 2012 at 8:25 am :
Awwww. Thanks emy!!!!!!1
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