Walk in the Rain

March 6, 2012
I've always wanted
to walk in the rain
To feel each drop
wash away my pain
To let the beauty
soak into my skin
To let out what is
trapped within
I've always wanted
to dance in a storm
To feel the freedom
without any form
To hear the thunder
pound out a beat
To move my body
and feel the heat
I've always wanted
to cry in the rain
Just so that no one
could see my pain
To have my tears
mix with every drop
To cry and cry
and never have to stop

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MissEmilyDickinson This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 8, 2014 at 3:24 pm
Oh geez luis, this perfectly describes how I've felt and sometimes still feel. It's perfect. It's absolutely wonderful. It has so much depth, emotion, and you. I can connect to it, so much. I was there, if that makes sense. Thank you for sharing this. Thank you so much, again. You are a talented and wonderful person and writer. I hope you know that. Thank you again.
wolfexeder said...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 12:31 pm
ps babe i love the rain it just makes me so calm
wolfexeder said...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 4:19 pm
i hope i can make this happen for u babe
guardianofthestars This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 24, 2012 at 4:24 pm
Really good :) I love how you have the different aspects of a rain storm & how you have the "writer" react to them.
kimberdawn replied...
Apr. 25, 2012 at 1:18 pm
Thank you I appreciate that! 
wolfexeder replied...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 11:21 am
i love this one to babe  
kimberdawn replied...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 2:41 pm
thanks.....i try really hard...
wolfexeder replied...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 3:43 pm
i dont want to be over this is your mom saying that i love u and i have talked to people to see what i could do to keep u here
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