Walk in the Rain

March 6, 2012
By kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do.









~Galileo


I've always wanted
to walk in the rain
To feel each drop
wash away my pain
To let the beauty
soak into my skin
To let out what is
trapped within
I've always wanted
to dance in a storm
To feel the freedom
without any form
To hear the thunder
pound out a beat
To move my body
and feel the heat
I've always wanted
to cry in the rain
Just so that no one
could see my pain
To have my tears
mix with every drop
To cry and cry
and never have to stop


The author's comments:
Don't threaten me with love, baby. Let's just go walking in the rain.
Billie Holiday

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on Sep. 8 2014 at 3:24 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Oh geez luis, this perfectly describes how I've felt and sometimes still feel. It's perfect. It's absolutely wonderful. It has so much depth, emotion, and you. I can connect to it, so much. I was there, if that makes sense. Thank you for sharing this. Thank you so much, again. You are a talented and wonderful person and writer. I hope you know that. Thank you again.

on Sep. 28 2012 at 12:31 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

ps babe i love the rain it just makes me so calm

on Sep. 27 2012 at 4:19 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

i hope i can make this happen for u babe

on Sep. 26 2012 at 3:43 pm
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

i dont want to be over this is your mom saying that i love u and i have talked to people to see what i could do to keep u here

on Sep. 26 2012 at 2:41 pm
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do.









~Galileo

thanks.....i try really hard...

on Sep. 26 2012 at 11:21 am
wolfexeder BRONZE, Chubbuck, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
the pain will go away but the scares will remain.

i love this one to babe  

on Apr. 25 2012 at 1:18 pm
kimberdawn SILVER, Sedalia, Missouri
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun, with all these planets revolving around it and dependent upon it, can still ripen a bunch of grapes as if it has nothing else in the universe to do.









~Galileo

Thank you I appreciate that! 

on Apr. 24 2012 at 4:24 pm
GuardianoftheStars GOLD, Shongaloo, Louisiana
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"Let's tell young people the best books are yet to be written; the best painting, the best government, the best of everything is yet to be done by them."
-John Erslcine

Really good :) I love how you have the different aspects of a rain storm & how you have the "writer" react to them.


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