March 5, 2012
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I made things so clear
You really had nothing to fear
But now when it is too late
You realize what could have been our fate

When you could of had me
You for some reason couldn’t see
I was just waiting for the opportunity
And well you took too long to see reality

I tried one last sign
To show you I could rewind time
But ignorance was your choice
So I’m done wasting my voice

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The_Real_ArielNever_Died said...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 8:54 pm

Okay i need your rhyming skills !! :P


shrutimallik said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 7:34 pm
best piece i have read in a while.....good job!
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 7:33 pm
Lovely, thanks for sharing, you're good at rhyming :)
ginger97 said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 4:16 pm
here keven i posted a comment:p it was a very nice poem
ificandream said...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 9:09 pm
I really liked your rhyme scheme! It really made the flow of your poem awesome.
Privyet said...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 9:08 pm
The last line is definitely the best 
futurenovelist1577 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 12, 2012 at 2:47 pm
It reminds me of a piece i wrote...i like it, keep writing!
Khiana said...
Mar. 11, 2012 at 9:07 pm
love it. keep writing u r really talented
Khiana said...
Mar. 11, 2012 at 9:06 pm
i love it. keep writing
Joshua. said...
Mar. 11, 2012 at 8:58 pm
Good job. Keep writing! 
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