Why..?

March 5, 2012
By keven_j BRONZE, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
keven_j BRONZE, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
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I made things so clear
You really had nothing to fear
But now when it is too late
You realize what could have been our fate

When you could of had me
You for some reason couldn’t see
I was just waiting for the opportunity
And well you took too long to see reality

I tried one last sign
To show you I could rewind time
But ignorance was your choice
So I’m done wasting my voice



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on Apr. 17 2012 at 8:54 pm
The_Real_ArielNever_Died PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"To love me is a ticket to hate " - Myself

Okay i need your rhyming skills !! :P

 


shrutimallik said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 7:34 pm
best piece i have read in a while.....good job!

on Mar. 30 2012 at 7:33 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Lovely, thanks for sharing, you're good at rhyming :)

on Mar. 27 2012 at 4:16 pm
ginger97 BRONZE, Mathews, North Carolina
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here keven i posted a comment:p it was a very nice poem

on Mar. 22 2012 at 9:09 pm
Italy_Felixis GOLD, Walpole, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"For in dreams we enter a world that is entirely our own."

I really liked your rhyme scheme! It really made the flow of your poem awesome.

Privyet BRONZE said...
on Mar. 22 2012 at 9:08 pm
Privyet BRONZE, Bethesda, Maryland
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The last line is definitely the best 

on Mar. 12 2012 at 2:47 pm
futurenovelista SILVER, Staatsburg, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"But I being poor have only my dreams...I place my dreams at your feet. Tread softly for you tread on my dreams." -Yeats

It reminds me of a piece i wrote...i like it, keep writing!

Kassity SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 9:07 pm
Kassity SILVER, Lansing, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Not all scars show, not all wounds heal, sometimes you cant always see, the pain someone feels.

love it. keep writing u r really talented

Kassity SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 9:06 pm
Kassity SILVER, Lansing, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Not all scars show, not all wounds heal, sometimes you cant always see, the pain someone feels.

i love it. keep writing

Joshua. GOLD said...
on Mar. 11 2012 at 8:58 pm
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?" - Hunter S Tompson

Good job. Keep writing! 


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