The End Of More Than Just A Relationship

March 3, 2012
By Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me


Drip drop, drip drop
Rain falls on the house
Like a constant reminder
That your gone...for good

And as i sit in silence
I think about reasons to live
But i can find none
My soul is gone...for good

If only you knew
That the angel of death was upon me
Maybe you would save me
But now im gone...for good

The author's comments:
My inspiration for this was in pieces by linkin park and my own past experiences

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DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2012 at 10:41 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Awesome poem. Great use of emotion. Suggestion: end with a hook.

on Jun. 16 2012 at 9:08 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss

Really good! Love it! Wait.........do you happen to speak from experience........... ahahahaha akward..................

on May. 6 2012 at 3:45 pm
RebeccaMey SILVER, Poughkeepsie, New York
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Favorite Quote:
If you love it let it go. If it comes back to you its yours to keep.

I really like that you put your heart into it. Maybe you should end it with a rhyming cuplet... Kind of like Shakespeare's 18th Sonnet. 

But over all, I really like it.


on Mar. 9 2012 at 4:37 pm
dancing.inthe.rain GOLD, Bowling Green, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"We all fear death and question our place in the universe. The artist's job is not to subcome to dispair, but to find an antidote for the emptiness of existance." -Gertrude Stein in the movie Midnight In Paris.

short and simple, yet deep. i like it.


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