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The End Of More Than Just A Relationship

Drip drop, drip drop
Rain falls on the house
Like a constant reminder
That your gone...for good

And as i sit in silence
I think about reasons to live
But i can find none
My soul is gone...for good

If only you knew
That the angel of death was upon me
Maybe you would save me
But now im gone...for good



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DanielM said...
Jul. 30, 2012 at 10:41 am
Awesome poem. Great use of emotion. Suggestion: end with a hook.
 
HarryPotterLover30 said...
Jun. 16, 2012 at 9:08 pm
Really good! Love it! Wait.........do you happen to speak from experience........... ahahahaha akward..................
 
RebeccaMey said...
May 6, 2012 at 3:45 pm

I really like that you put your heart into it. Maybe you should end it with a rhyming cuplet... Kind of like Shakespeare's 18th Sonnet. 

But over all, I really like it.

 
live.with.no.regretsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 9, 2012 at 4:37 pm
short and simple, yet deep. i like it.
 
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