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shouldnt of let her go

March 3, 2012
By jnickyk98 BRONZE, South Greensburg, Pennsylvania
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jnickyk98 BRONZE, South Greensburg, Pennsylvania
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do to others as though you wud want done to u

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what were you thinking?
she's gone your all alone
she was the one u were guarenteed to have forever
but u chose another woman over her
she cries at night due to ur lack of thinking the sititution through
she ask for on thing
you to be a father
yet u couldnt do it why?
is a ring more imporant
shes not the mother
the mother is gone forever
yet u think your childs opinion would matter to you
youve given her thoughts she should never have
"would he care if i were gone forever as mother is?"
"did he ever care?"
"did he ever evn want me?"
the pain of wondering
makes matters worse
if you would reilize maybe things cud be diffrent

but u dont......

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on Mar. 5 2012 at 8:05 pm
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I love this! Very good! Please check out work!