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R.M.S.Titanic

February 26, 2012
By AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.


R.M.S.Titanic...
They called it the Ship of Dreams,
it sailed along like a tranquil reverie.
Some said it'll reach the States, some questioned it's destiny.
The dreaded night arrived at last. A powerful hand, a Demon's hand struck the sailing vessel, crushed it from the inside out, destroyed every single thing, sparing just a handful.
The mighty ship cleaved into half, plunging everything into the cold darkness of the infinite waters, plunging dreams, hopes, lives and love.
Titanic, a prisoner of fate, now lies underneath the Great Ocean, tranquil as when it first set sail, immortalizing a beautiful dream turned into a terrible nightmare...



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PiDaBest said...
on Mar. 23 2015 at 9:01 am
This is very meaningful.

necci SILVER said...
on Mar. 28 2013 at 9:55 am
necci SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
-Women are many things to humans, but the one thing they are not is dominated by men.
-If a single act of hate can do so much damage, what can a single act of kindness do?

wow very good

on Mar. 5 2013 at 10:11 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thank you, anonymous :)

on Mar. 5 2013 at 8:11 am
AnonymousLoveLetter BRONZE, Chicago Hights, Illinois
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This one is really good too. You use your words really well when it comes to setting scenes.

on Jun. 19 2012 at 10:23 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thanks so much for the comment :D even I'm fond of that line :) I'm such a titanic fanatic !! though it was a very tragic incident, it really captures my attention and I'm very much drawn to anything that has to do with the ship. and the movie... just too good!

on Jun. 5 2012 at 1:11 pm
Eliquencity PLATINUM, Winfield, Illinois
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Favorite line: "A powerful hand, a Demon's hand struck the sailing vessel, crushed it..." Displaying the iceberg as a demon's hand, crushing the ship? Great writing, augustsummerfling!

If this interests you, I was in my school's Titanic: The Musical production. I cried during the show. :)  There was a song that went, "Ship of Dreams!", so I could relate that to your poem.

Powerful verbs; powerful writing; descriptive. It's no head-scratcher why you recieved sixty comments.


on Jun. 4 2012 at 11:50 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thank you ;)

on Jun. 4 2012 at 11:46 pm
KateLovesMusicAndArt BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
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This is great! :)  KEEP WRITING

on Jun. 4 2012 at 11:39 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

understood ;)

hypermagical said...
on Jun. 3 2012 at 9:25 am
hypermagical, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
You can quote me on that.

oy, sorry 'bout that! i meant that it didn't actually have sails. of coure it was a sailing ship!

on Jun. 3 2012 at 8:59 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

was not a sailing ship? I dont really get you... anyway glad you liked it :)

hypermagical said...
on Jun. 2 2012 at 5:36 am
hypermagical, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
You can quote me on that.

I like this poem for it's imagery, but I'd like to point out that RMS Titanic was not a sailing ship.

on Apr. 25 2012 at 11:06 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thank you :) :)

on Apr. 22 2012 at 9:34 am
Allicat001 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is not someone you can live with, love is someone you can't live without."

"Always stand up for what's right even if that means you're standing alone."

This is a great poem, very well written!

on Apr. 21 2012 at 4:22 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thank you :)

on Apr. 16 2012 at 12:26 pm
BekkaGoodwin BRONZE, Haddonfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"We are so accustomed to disguise ourselves from others that in the end we become disguised to ourselves." -Francois de La Rochefoucauld

This is really good! Amazing choice of words. I really like it! :) Great job!

on Apr. 13 2012 at 10:03 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Glad you liked it :)

on Apr. 13 2012 at 7:42 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I really liked this poem, though I've never reallyy been much of a titanic fan. Still I liked the imagry and passion.

on Apr. 8 2012 at 9:54 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
35 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thank you!

Rain. SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 7:08 am
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

This was beautifully constructed !