Stay Untouched

February 24, 2012
By Graybass17 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
Graybass17 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We accept the love we think we deserve"

To have never seen bizarre grief
Or trust in belief
Paired vision of foresight
Never having to know between wrong and what's right

Tempted hearts speak languages lost
Tongues cut from throats at simple cost
But never to have known consequence of a game called quits
No paranoia to give a mind delusion-ed hints

A heart felt but never tampered with
Your actions are quite preposterous
Intangible to society and all the offers it has

Never knowing pain
Incapable of harm in any sense
This is an untouched soul that life has missed

You are my blue eyed baby girl
That the world has left untouched,
Your new, your spontaneous, your laughter never subsides,
Can you please stay....untouched.

Don’t let the world modify
You, don’t let unruly boys near you
You can avail yourself, but for now...just for now
Stay untouched.

Your smiles contagious, and never tedious
Seldom chastised about your new born dialect
Now this atrocious world has a chance to get you
but please, for this moment...stay untouched

I look into your eyes
And see the magic of the world
I also see my best friend
My special girl,

I could never deplore you
You bundle of joy, your innocence hovering
Waiting to be snatched...
Just stay untouched

You loll on your playtime mat
Seeing nothings amiss,
Your little world is filled with kindness.
But sad truth to be told,

That future may be cold,
But for now, you are a blue eyed baby girl,
That the world has not touched,
And that suits you just fine,

Staying untouched.

The author's comments:
I was hoping to get some constructed feedback for this piece, written about my new cousin.

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on May. 2 2012 at 6:38 pm
JustPaperAndPencil BRONZE, Milford, Ohio
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The saddest thing in the world, is loving someone who used to love you.

This is Really good. You're a great writer. Keep up the good work!(:

on May. 2 2012 at 10:13 am
Stleemusic SILVER, Genvea, Alabama
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life's to short to put up with other peoples bull. just take the time to stop and think and do what makes you happy

you are a great writer love this poem . in my opinion im not much for hard core detail say what you need to say so simple and sutle that you'll remember it forever it just like wrighting music a simple part of the song well get stuck in your head. little do people know but simplisity drive everyone


on Apr. 4 2012 at 8:14 pm
bloodroselove SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
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i actually really like this. your passion is so obvious and i love that! you ceartinly have quite the vocabulary too keep it up! i hope some more waork from you in the future. btw also love how detailed it is personally im obbsessed with details in my writing so i appreciate that (:

on Apr. 3 2012 at 7:01 pm
Graybass17 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
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"We accept the love we think we deserve"

Any comment is welcome! Just looking for constructive feedback..I'm kind of new at this!


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