Drowning

What did I do to deserve this?
What did I do to make everything go wrong?
Did take the shot and miss?
Did I miss a note in the song?

Feeling hurt,
Feeling ache,
Feeling as if I can't make
Everything right again.

I failed to see the road ahead,
That much I know.
I knew that this would happen,
So why didn't it slow?

All my friends,
Left to flee.
All my dreams,
Drowning out at sea.

One thing that I have learned,
Never say, "Surely, things cannot get worse!"
You will be burned,
Not able to recover,
Not able to break the curse.





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moderndayEmilyDickinson This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 23, 2014 at 11:26 am
You can break the curse, you just have to believe. I can connect. My life had a sudden big change once, it took a sudden turn. I wasn't sure what to think, I was a little excited, but the rest of the feelings? They were a mystery. And when I got to that change, I wasn't really happy, but I tried to go along with it. Now I'm fine with the change, but let me tell you. Change was so hard. Change can be very hard, I know, but they turn out good in the end somehow. Evrything comes out alr... (more »)
 
M-and-M-Denver replied...
Sept. 10, 2014 at 9:34 pm
you don't know how much what u said means to me :) even though i wrote this years ago, it still applies now. thank you for being a little light of hope for a writer such as i :) 
 
MissEmilyDickinson This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 11, 2014 at 10:54 am
You're welcome! : ) It was no problem at all. ^_^ I'm glad I was able to give you hope. ^_^
 
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