February 25, 2012
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I waited for you to become ripe

to release your self from the rough tree you were growing on for so long

but it held on to you and then it dropped you without warning

the perfect pineapple you are is no more: you hit the ground and got hurt

I tried to catch you, but now you’re hurt and you’re sour

and I am sad cause I wanted to taste your sweetness but you were to bruised and gross

then unaware to me when I left you, you had put on a mask covering up what was wrong

I was unaware of your insidious ways because you were hiding the mushiness that you are

I picked you up a little confused but still believing my eyes,

and so I brought you with me to my place where it was just me, and you wasted my time

when I cut you open your mask came off and the sour mushy pineapple was shown

your beauty is gone and you have torn my eyes and feelings up and it is no more

but something about your pricks attracts me and I’m in a cycle of confusion and I cant leave

you were so great and your going to be once again: the rough tree you once were one with

it has grown a new pineapple and you cant attach yourself again its over but you wont leave it

you cant forget and the feelings that I had are now remembered and your beautiful again

your my pineapple and I adore you in ways words cant express or capture how i want you.

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J-Nav said...
Mar. 28, 2012 at 10:41 am
hey!this is really good!i love the metaphor used in the whole poem! keep writing!
ValentinesEyes said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 9:43 am
AWSOME! I enjoyed reading this!
MarleyRainbow said...
Mar. 12, 2012 at 2:11 pm
i loved how you compared it to a pineapple it was really great...
nebhogan replied...
Mar. 12, 2012 at 6:35 pm

there is a story behind it if anyone cares to know


greenyman replied...
Mar. 13, 2012 at 8:26 pm
soo good, i think more ppl should read
mykaster said...
Mar. 12, 2012 at 4:13 am
aw that was so nice :)
nebhogan replied...
Mar. 12, 2012 at 11:44 am
thank you, things have changed since then so now im writing a new one about the situation
Sapphire1225 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 12, 2012 at 2:27 am
so sweeet :)
Brittany82594 said...
Mar. 12, 2012 at 2:04 am

Very good i like it(:


Elizabeth said...
Mar. 7, 2012 at 11:29 am

This is a beautiful poem that shows. I really love the way it's so beautifully written. For sure a young talented writer.



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