river

February 23, 2012
By AllenStovall PLATINUM, Port Lavaca, Texas
AllenStovall PLATINUM, Port Lavaca, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"two things are infinate, the universe and human stupidity, and im still not sure about the universe"
albert einstein


Plinking!Plooping!Plopping!Pling!
Trickle!Treakle!fickle thing.
The sweet hymm of a youthhful stream.

Rushing! Racing! Running! Gush!
Swiftly sweeping! Flowing! Hush.
The sweet melody of a rivers rush.

Crashing! Crushing! Bashing! Cascading!
Falling! Diving! beutiful! captivating.
The majestic roar of a waterfall racing.

Sludge. Trudge. Barely budge.
Dirt. Trash. A halfhearted nudge.
The mournful keening of a river leaving.


The author's comments:
this i about a polluted river and i gave it onamatopia to bring the peice life. hope ya'll like it

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