Nightmare Into a Dream

February 18, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...


Silver intertwines our lips,
Passion,
Sweet, hushing dawn...
Sparkling surrender of your eyes,
Quiet, my love...
Am I not enough to soothe your beckoning sadness?
Lay back,
Allow radiance in...
...As I sing gently....
So gently... 
Speaking to this haunting,
Blinding it by beauty,
Twisting it to shine,
So bright...
Captivated.

No longer a slave to their image of perfection,
I'll make you Free,
To see just who you are deep within...

As I write this Nightmare Into A Dream.~


The author's comments:
This is about how being with someone you love, and how they make you feel... Peaceful, beautiful, and just perfect... They love you with all of your imperfections, and they only want to sing you to sleep, and let you feel... Complete.~
This is for the boy that did that for me.
I still love you....<3

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on Apr. 6 2012 at 4:47 pm
EmmettHerculeLaFave SILVER, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"We have it in our power to begin the world over again." -Thomas Paine

Very powerful and uplifting; something I'd read over if I was ever scared or unsure about something. Thought it was very good. Spot on, once again.

on Apr. 6 2012 at 10:02 am
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

It's talking about how love will erase all the fears of life, how someone makes you feel peaceful and you have beautiful dreams instead of bad nightmares. And the first metaphor was supposed to be like the girls lips were silver, like lipstick color...

on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:54 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

Didn't really like this one.. I don't understand the first lines metaphor.. And nightmares are dreams. xD So is she going to do nothing?

on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:38 am
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius.
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring.\"
-Marilyn Monroe

Ok, this one is absolute PERFECTION.  Honestly, I can't even describe it (: You need to infuse me with your talent darling xx

on Apr. 6 2012 at 7:42 am
FleshRipper GOLD, Guilford, Indiana
15 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm not surprised, it's just kinda suprising." -me

This is absolutely amazing! It's my favorite of your pieces. I've read it like ten times. You are one great poet!

on Apr. 5 2012 at 8:19 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

Beautiful. I love how u used your own experience and wrote it so beautifully into a poem. I know by now all my comments are repetitve, but I seriously love each one. each one. It would be a crime not to write

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on Mar. 23 2012 at 2:00 pm
This was absolutely beautiful. It made me want to cry. I love the metaphors!

on Mar. 21 2012 at 6:35 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Awww thank you:)

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on Mar. 21 2012 at 6:33 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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This one's my favorite :) I think this is absolutely stunning :)

TapTap SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2012 at 8:09 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

My petite vocabulary and knowledge cannot comprehend the beauty behind this peice of art. But, Although it's beyond my knowledge, I do know it's intensly plump with emotion. Fabulous job.

on Mar. 10 2012 at 3:07 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Thank you, and absolutely! No problem at all!(:

on Mar. 10 2012 at 12:13 pm
SpreadUrWingzNFly BRONZE, Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania
4 articles 0 photos 20 comments
That was pure beauty and raw emotion, im suprised I'm the first person to comment on this. If you could be so kind as to read a few of mine and give your feedback I would really appriceate it, thanx. 


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