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Life Changing Moment

February 17, 2012
By Shortty1314 GOLD, Fox Lake, Illinois
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Shortty1314 GOLD, Fox Lake, Illinois
14 articles 2 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What, do you really think I was
strong enough to handle it?
If you did, then sweetie, you
don't know me at all.
These "smiles" are fake.
Just another lie people bought.
You will never know the disaster
that's behind them." -Anonymous

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When you think you've fallen too deep,
they're there to hold you up.
 
When you feel your smile fading away,
they're there to regain it back for you.
 
When you sense something bad happening,
they're there to reasssure you things will be okay.
 
They will always be there through it all.
 
 
When you think you've fallen in love,
they're there to love you back.
 
When you feel grateful for something,
they're there to share your smile.
 
When you can sense the upcoming future,
they're there to hold you forever.
 
They are a life-changer & love being there.

The author's comments:
I only have a couple of people who I can call life-changers. But I'm glad they are a part of my life (:
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Shortty1314 GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2012 at 5:38 pm
Shortty1314 GOLD, Fox Lake, Illinois
14 articles 2 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What, do you really think I was
strong enough to handle it?
If you did, then sweetie, you
don't know me at all.
These "smiles" are fake.
Just another lie people bought.
You will never know the disaster
that's behind them." -Anonymous

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thanks so much (:
Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Mar. 13 2012 at 9:12 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
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I really like this. It is really relatable. There are a few people that I could also call life-changers and, obviously, my life wouldn't be the same without them! Nicely done!!