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Venomous words they'll spout and spew,
Never with a thought to you.
Your heart is broken,
but tears don't come.
He broke your heart, without a backward glance,
at what he left behind,
here in the past.
He broke your heart,
and nearly shattered your soul
And it took such a great toll,
on me, my heart
the only things left.
You try to move on
but never seem better
because,
you are shattered.





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TheLostRomantic This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 8, 2012 at 7:51 pm
excellent word choice, if definately hooked me in the begining but lost me along the way. i suggest ending with more powerful thought, or idea
 
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 5:31 pm
Interesting, your rhyme has a lot of promise and your flow is quite good, though I think it could use a little more imagery and personality. Keep writing, you've got potential :)
 
LalaskaGrown replied...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 5:43 pm
I agree with I am. It is amazing. You are an awsome poet
 
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